Update done, thanks Meral. Here is the new version (-19): http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch The diff is: http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-19
Regards! -Qin WU ----- Original Message ----- From: "Meral Shirazipour" <[email protected]> To: <[email protected]> Cc: <[email protected]> Sent: Tuesday, September 11, 2012 4:42 AM Subject: Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-18 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-18 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2012-09-10 IETF LC End Date: 2012-08-02 IESG Telechat date: 2012-09-13 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an RFC but I have some last editorial comments. Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 5], in the definition of "Application level metrics", typo: "ususally"--typo-->"usually" -[Page 9], Section 3.2, 3rd paragraph, "can use for it's reports"---->"can use for its reports" -[Page 19], Section 9, "encyption of"--typo-->"encryption of" New versions available since last update: -Section 11, Ref [MEASI], version 10 is latest. If appropriate, please consider updating. -Section 11, Ref [PDV], version 05 is latest. If appropriate, please consider updating. Thanks, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
