I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-nea-asokan-01.txt Reviewer: Kathleen Moriarty Review Date: September 21, 2012 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: The document is ready for publication and there are just two tiny nits. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In the introduction, I recommend including (NEA) after the full name is listed. The acronym is used shortly after without being explicitly defined. In the conclusion section, the second bullet is the only one that does not end with a ".". _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
