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Document: draft-ietf-lisp-eid-block-03
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2012-11-27
IETF LC End Date: 2012-11-27
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is almost ready for publication but I have some editorial comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
[Page 5], paragraph 4, "((i.e., a Data " ----> please remove extra "("
[Page 6], paragraph 1, "By defining an IPv6 EID Block is possible" --missing
'it'--> "By defining an IPv6 EID Block it is possible "
[Page 6], paragraph 1, "the router so to natively" --remove 'so'--> "the router
to natively"
[Page 6], paragraph 1, "while facilitating its large-scale deployment"---> can
"its" be replaced by LISP's ?
[Page 6], Section 4 title, "Expected use" --upper case--> "Expected Use"
[Page 6], Section 4, "Too guarantee" --typo--> "To guarantee"
[Page 6], Section 5, line 1, "allocation of a /16 prefix" --clarity-->
"allocation of a /16 IPv6 prefix"
[Page 7], Section 6, "(Locator/ID Separation protocol)"--uppercase P-->
"(Locator/ID Separation Protocol)"
Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com
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