I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: raft-schaad-pkix-rfc2875-bis-03 Reviewer: Martin Thomson Review Date: 2012-12-06 IETF LC End Date: Aaaages IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: Looks good to me. Ship it. Nits/editorial comments: Section 3 does not establish a notation convention for multiplication. I didn't find a specific place that this was a problem, but it seemed appropriate since multiplications was, in some places denoted 'n*b' and others as 'xy', even though multi-character identifiers are used in many places. This does imply that a precedence override is necessary. I suggest parentheses, since they are already used extensively. Section 3: s/MAC funtion/MAC functions/ Section 5: could use a more rigorous list construction, the definitions all run together Needs more ASN.1 --Martin _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
