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Document: draft-ietf-mboned-auto-multicast-14 Reviewer: Mary Barnes Review Date: 14 Dec 2012 IETF LC End Date: 19 Dec 2012 Summary: Ready with comment/nits. Minor comments: ---------------- References: - There is a normative downref to RFC 1321. Does this need to be a normative reference? Note, I could not find the shepherd write-up in the tracker to see if this had been noted and explained. Nits: ----- IDNITS identifies the following: - there are 15 instances of two long of lines - there is an obsolete reference to RFC 2236 (Obsoleted by RFC 3376) - there are a number of unused references that can likely be removed. - General: please add #s to all the figures - Section 4.1.3, 1st sentence: shouldn't "relay services gateways" be "relay services gateway" - Appendix A.1, 2nd paragraph: "Section Section 5.3.6" -> "Section 5.3.6" _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
