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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-udp-encaps-07
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Jan-11-2013
IETF LC End Date: Jan-22-2013
IESG Telechat date: Feb-07-2013
This document is ready as a Proposed Standard.
Major: 0
Minor: 2
Nits: 1
Minor:
- S4.1, second paragraph: I suspect that the expectation is that
the SCTP stack uses a single local UDP port number for
*all local interfaces*, right? As written currently, the qualifier
for "all local interfaces" is missing --- maybe it is assumed? If so,
better to state explicitly.
- S5, second paragraph ("Please note that this section is informational
only.") --- I am not sure the value of this sentence. The draft itself
is targeted as a standards track document, so it comes as a surprise
that a certain section is to be exempted from normative language. How-
ever, since there isn't any normative language (as per rfc2119) in the
remainder of S5, why bother with informing the reader that this section
is informational? My suggestion would be to simply remove the
offending sentence to decrease any ambiguity.
Nits:
- S3.1, third paragraph: I would suggest "s/user-land/user space".
It is better to be academic than colloquial here.
Thanks,
- vijay
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