Please see attached review.
Brian
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Document: draft-ietf-eman-rfc4133bis-05.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2013-01-19
IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-25
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Summary: Ready (nits)
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Comment:
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I didn't find any mention of a MIB Doctor review in the tracker. Since two
authors are MIB Doctors, it should be OK.
I did not review the details of the MIB module.
Nits:
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In the Abstract, "This document specifies version of the Entity MIB"
seems to lack a "4".
I would have expected a short paragraph starting "Version 4 of this MIB
addresses new requirements... " just before section 2.1.
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