Hi Roni, Thanks. Will do the edit you pointed out. Thanks, Nbail
From: Roni Even <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Date: Tuesday, February 12, 2013 1:46 AM To: "[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Cc: "[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, "[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ancp-pon-04 Resent-To: <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, "<, [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>", <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ancp-pon-04 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013–2–12 IETF LC End Date: 2013-2–19 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. OMCI is expanded very late in the document and not on the first usage.
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