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Document: draft-ietf-radext-radius-extensions-12
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-02-18
IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-25
IESG Telechat date: 2013-02-21

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard (with some 
editorial comments).


Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 15], 3rd paragraph, "withing"--typo-->"within"
-[Page 27], Figure at the bottom is cut.
-[Page 32], Figure at the bottom is cut.
-[Page 37], Section 5.2, "implementors"-typo?-->"implementers"


Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
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www.ericsson.com
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