Hi, I have reviewed the -04 version. My comments on -03 have been addressed, and the document is ready for publication.
Regards, Christer -----Original Message----- From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Christer Holmberg Sent: 5. helmikuuta 2013 2:55 To: [email protected] Cc: [email protected] Subject: [Gen-art] Genart review of draft-shafranovich-mime-sql-03 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-shafranovich-mime-sql-03.txt Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 5 Feb 2013 IETF LC End Date: 20 Feb 2013 IETF Telechat Date: 21 Feb 2013 Summary: The draft is well written, with a couple of minor editorial comments (see below), and is ready for publication. Major Issues: None Minor Issues: None Editorial nits: None Q_ED_1: In section 2, I suggest to remove "which will be submitted to IANA after approval of this document.". Q_ED_2: In section 3, I suggest to remove "After approval,". Best regards, Christer _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
