On 16/03/2013 17:39, Barry Leiba wrote:
>> Please see attached review.
> 
> I'll counter-complain (see below) that you're the only GenART reviewer
> who sends reviews as attachments, and I find it a PitA.

That depends very much on the recipient's UA. Many UAs don't even blink
at text/plain. The reason I do it is because the reviews are archived as
.txt files so it's a convenience for the archiver.

>> The draft was updated during Last Call, which I thought was not normal
>> practice.  This review is of the updated draft, not the one that was Last
>> Called.
> 
> I asked the authors to post it, so reviewers would be seeing the
> latest version.  Now that we have the datatracker, this really should
> not be a problem, and as a reviewer I appreciate not reviewing a
> version with issues that others have already caught.

I didn't intend that as a complaint, but actually a Last Call is
for a specific version, so a reviewer could easily miss an update.

>> There is no explicit discussion of privacy in the draft, which seems to
>> me to carry evident privacy risks. For example, imagine an ISP that
>> kindly decides to support webfinger for all customers by default,
>> and preloads personally identifiable information without consent.
> 
> There's quite a bit of discussion in the Security Considerations of
> personal information, revealing a user's current context, and so on.
> 
>> There is some relevant text in the Security Considerations:
> 
> Indeed.
> 
>> However, the weakness there is the words "or implicitly". IANAL, but it
>> seems highly likely that would be illegal in the European Union, at least.
> 
> And we are not lawyers either, and deployers in the EU will need to be
> well aware of EU laws.  We shouldn't be telling them about those here.

No. But IMHO the draft should dissect that "implicitly" a bit more, to
ensure that implementors and operators don't miss its, er, implications.

>> Has the draft been validated against the guidelines in
>> draft-iab-privacy-considerations?
> 
> That'd be the document that's not even in the RFC Editor queue yet?

Correct, but it's pretty mature.

> I don't know whether the authors have read that document; perhaps they
> can say.  I did ask the authors to alert Alissa to this document, and
> to explicitly ask her to review it.

That would be excellent.

   Brian
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