Ben: Thank you very much for this re-review and the original review. I plan to ballot No Objection for this document, based on your review, but (as I normally do) I will also do a quick review myself to see if there's anything that stands out.
Jari On Apr 19, 2013, at 11:51 PM, Ben Campbell <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-ospf-ipv4-embedded-ipv6-routing-11 > Reviewer: Ben Campbell > Review Date: 2013-04-19 > IESG Telechat date: 2013-04-25 > > Summary: Ready for publication as an informational RFC. All of the comments > from my previous review of version 07 have been addressed. However, there > > Major issues: > > None > > Minor issues: > > None > > Nits/editorial comments: > > Note: The online IDNits tool appears to be broken today, so I was unable to > recheck this version. > > There is a new section 12 added since version 07. If there is another > revision prior to approval, I suggest the authors make another pass at > proofreading it. If not, the errors are all of the sort that can be > reasonably fixed by the RFC editor. Some specifics: > > -- paragraph 3, 1st sentence: "If one approach is to be deployed, it is the > operator's decision for the choice." > > -- paragraph 4, 1st sentence: "... there requires some configurations." > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
