Hi,

Could you say something like "including references to test case descriptions 
and interoperability reports, when such exist."?

Regards,

Christer

-----Original Message-----
From: Yaron Sheffer [mailto:[email protected]] 
Sent: 24. huhtikuuta 2013 15:44
To: Christer Holmberg
Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]
Subject: Re: Genart review of draft-sheffer-running-code-04

Hi Christer,

thanks for your review!

The current (rather vague) wording is:

    In addition, this section can contain information about the
    interoperability of any or all of the implementations.

We could add: "including references to interoperability reports, when such 
exist."

Thanks,
        Yaron

On 2013-04-24 10:40, Christer Holmberg wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on 
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at 
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>
>
> Document:                         draft-sheffer-running-code-04
>
> Reviewer:                           Christer Holmberg
>
> Review Date:                     23 April 2013
>
> IETF LC End Date:             10 May 2013
>
> IETF Telechat Date           N/A
>
> Summary:  The draft is well written, with a minor issues/question.
>
> Major Issues: None
>
> Minor Issues: I think it would be good to also describe and/or 
> reference the test cases that were performed in order to determine the 
> interoperability. In some cases it may be obvious, but if an 
> Internet-Draft specifies a large protocol, with many features and 
> options, just saying that there exist interoperability between two 
> implementations doesn’t really say much.
>
> Editorial nits: None
>
> Best regards,
>
> Christer
>
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