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Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-6man-addr-select-opt-10.txt Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 20 May 2013 IETF LC End Date: 15 May 20, 2013 IESG Telechat date: N/A Summary: The draft is ready for publication, with a couple of minor editorial comments. Major issues: - Minor issues: - Nits/editorial comments: Q1_GENERAL: The document is inconsistent when referencing other RFCs. It uses either "RFC XXXX [RFCXXXX]", "RFC XXXX" or "[RFCXXXX]". I would suggest to use consistent way of referencing other RFCs. Q2_2: In section 2, you use "our" and "we" terminology, which could be a little confusing. If you are e.g. talking about the context/scope of the draft, I think you should use "this document", or something. If you talk about some background work/studies that has been done, maybe you could talk about "the authors", or something. Or, have I misunderstood something? Regards, Christer _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
