Thank you for the review, Suresh. Steve et al, do you have thoughts on these? FWIW, I think the question on 2.3 is quite important.
Jari On Jun 24, 2013, at 3:12 PM, Suresh Krishnan <[email protected]> wrote: > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ad-vpn-problem-07.txt > Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan > Review Date: 2013/06/24 > IESG Telechat date: 2013/06/27 > > Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational > RFC but I do have a few comments that the authors may want to consider. > > Minor > ===== > > * Section 2.3 > > The following sentence is a bit confusing. How does a mobile user > connect to a new gateway without reinitiating a connection? Can you > please clarify or reword. > > "The mobile user ought to be able to discover and then connect to the > current most efficient gateway without having to reinitiate the connection." > > * Section 4.1. Requirement 5 > > Shouldn't there be a requirement here that states what kind of damage is > allowed and prohibited in case a hub node is compromised? > > * Section 4.1. Requirement 12 > > It is unclear what this requirement means. Is the requirement for the > solution to integrate with multicast routing protocols to come up with a > different (and optimized) multicast ADVPN topology or to simply allow > the advpn to carry (flattened out) multicast traffic? > > * Section 4.1. Requirement 14 > > Are there any special requirements that L3VPN poses on top of what is > required for carrying generic IP traffic? If so, can you elaborate here. > > Thanks > Suresh > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
