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Document: draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-ropt-07.txt
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 16 July 2013
IETF LC End Date: 3 July 2013
IESG Telechat date: 18 July 2013
Summary: Ready for publication as an Experimental RFC with some nits
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
In 5.1.2:
Dynamic IP Multicast Selector Mode Flag:
This field indicates the subscription via MTMA/direct routing
mode. If the (M) flag value is set to a value of (1), it is an
indication that the IP multicast traffic associated to the
multicast group(s) identified by the Multicast Address Record(s)
in this mobility option SHOULD be routed locally (subscription via
direct routing mode). If the (M) flag value is set to a value of
(0), it is an indication that IP multicast traffic associated to
the multicast group(s) identified by the Multicast Address Record
in this mobility option(s) SHOULD be routed to the home network,
via the MTMA (subscription via MTMA mode). All other IP traffic
associated with the mobile node SHOULD be managed according to a
default policy configured at the PMIPv6 multicast domain.
The last sentence: I don't think you should use RFC 2119 SHOULD here.
I think you are saying that this document doesn't affect all other IP
traffic. So just use "is managed" instead of "SHOULD be managed".
Is IANA Considerations section clear to IANA? I suggest you add at least
the URI for the IANA registry.
Is IANA registration policy compatible with the type of document
(Experimental)? I can't check that, as I don't know which registry you
are talking about.
Nits/editorial comments:
In 3.3: acronyms PBU and PBA need to be expanded on first use. They are
expanded further down in the document.
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