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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-signaling-g709v3-11
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Aug-26-2013
IETF LC End Date: Unknown
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This document is ready as an Proposed Standard.
Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits: 1
Nits:
- S1, first paragraph: Expand "OTN" on first use. Also,
s/provided for [G709-2012]./provided for OTNs [G709-2012]./
The last substitution above is a general comment since this construct
appears multiple times in S1 and the rest of the document.
Essentially, you need a label before the reference itself. Making the
reference itself a label seems incongruent (at least to me). I am
filing this as a nit, so I will let you decide whether to change it or
not.
Thanks,
- vijay
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Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / [email protected]
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