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Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-qoe-12
RTP Control Protocol (RTCP) Extended Report (XR) Blocks for
MOS Metric Reporting
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 12-November-2013
IETF LC End Date: 27-November-2013
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed
Standard RFC
Major issues:
Moderate issues:
In section 3.2.2 on Multi-Channel audio per SSRC Segment, the
format description for the Calculation Algorithm ID (CAID) reads:
"The 8-bit ID is the local identifier of this segment in the range
1-255 inclusive." I am pretty sure this is supposed to be an algorithm
ID, not a segment index?
The text in section 4.1 indicates that the number after "calg:" in
the mapentry of the calgextmap is used as the ID in the CAID of the
xrblock. The packet format only allows 8 bits of value. So why does
the SDP format allow up to 5 digits? Also, is there some reason that
the special values 4095-4351 (in section 4.1) or 4096-4351 (in section
4.2) are used rather than say equally invalid 512 through some
appropriate upper bound still in 3 digits?
Minor issues:
Please ensure that all acronyms are expanded on first use. For
example, QoE is not expanded.
The notes in B.3 indicate that mostype was to be removed from the
SDP grammar. But it is still defined. And section 4.2 still mentions
it, even though it does not get referenced by the message format.
Please finish removing it. (also "most type")
Nits/editorial comments:
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