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Document: draft-sin-sdnrg-sdn-approach-05.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2013/11/18
IESG Telechat date: 2013/11/21
Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational
RFC but I do have a few comments that the authors may wish to consider.
Minor
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* Section 2.1
-> Not sure if the word encoded is appropriate here.
s/hardware-encoded/usually implemented in hardware/
-> These two sentences are hard to read and it is not clear what point
they are trying to make. Please consider rewording.
As such, the current state-of-the-art tends to confirm the said
separation, which rather falls under a tautology.
But a somewhat centralized, "controller-embedded", control plane for
the sake of optimized route computation before FIB population is
certainly another story.
* Section 3.1
Not sure what this sentence is trying to convey. Can you clarify?
Some of these features have also been standardized (e.g., DNS-based
routing [RFC1383] that can be seen as an illustration of separated
control and forwarding planes or ForCES ([RFC5810][RFC5812])).
* Section 3.4
This direct access to some engines using a vendor-specific could be
beneficial to performance but may increase configuration complexity (in
opposition to the final goal in Section 4.1 of accommodating
heterogeneous network technologies). It may be worthwhile to add some
text to the following paragraph in this regard.
Maintaining hard-coded performance optimization techniques is
encouraged. So is the use of interfaces that allow the direct
control of some engines (e.g., routing, forwarding) without requiring
any in-between adaptation layer (generic objects to vendor-specific
CLI commands for instance).
* Section 3.5
This sentence is ambiguous
OpenFlow is clearly not the "next big thing"
Does this mean
a) OpenFlow is certainly not the "next best thing" (or)
b) It is not clear if OpenFlow will be the "next best thing"
Can you please clarify?
* Section 3.6
This sentence about non-goals is unclear. What are the "respective
software limitations"?
o Fully flexible software implementations, because the claimed
flexibility will be limited by respective software and hardware
limitations, anyway.
* Section 4.5
This sentence is long and complex, and the exact point it is trying to
make is not clear. Can you simplify/reword?
For example: while the deployment of a network solely composed of
OpenFlow switches within a data center environment is unlikely to
raise FIB scalability issues given the current state-of-the-art, data
center networking that relies upon complex, possibly IP-based, QoS-
inferred, interconnect design schemes meant to dynamically manage the
mobility of Virtual Machines between sites is certainly of another
scale.
* Section 4.6
Can you clarify what risk is being assessed here?
o Assessing whether SDN-labeled solutions are likely to obsolete
existing technologies because of hardware limitations.
Editorial
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* Section 3.3
s/policiy/policy/
Thanks
Suresh
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