Thanks for your review, Peter! Btw, I am trying to understand what happened when this document went to PS from INF. Last calls were definitely on INF.
Jari On Nov 18, 2013, at 8:23 PM, Peter Yee <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> > > Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-res-gw-lis-discovery-08 > Reviewer: Peter Yee > Review Date: Nov-18-2013 > IETF LC End Date: Jul-31-2013 > IESG Telechat date: Nov-21-2013 > > Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Proposed > Standard. [Ready with nits] > > The draft describes a means by which Devices behind a residential gateway > may discover the correct Location Information Server on the access network > providing Internet access to residential gateway. The Device may thereby > gain access to certain location-based services. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits: > > Page 13, 3rd paragraph, 3rd sentence: change ³even in the² to > ³even if the². Insert ³degree of² before ³accuracy². > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
