Kathleen: Thanks again for your detailed review work. You've made many reviews this time.
And thank you WG/authors for doing this important work. I have placed the no-obj position for this draft on tonight's IESG call. Authors, do you have comments on Kathleen's notes? Some observations below: > Section 3.2: At end of second to last paragraph, remove parenthesis around > full sentence. I think it is fine as is. > Section 4.2: Please break first sentence into multiple. I also had trouble parsing this sentence. > Section 4.3 - 4th paragraph really needs to be broken into multiple sentences. I felt that this one was a bit less troublesome than the 4.2. one. Jari _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
