I've looked at the -11 draft that just came out and it's fine. I understand that the document has been deferred from this week's agenda, so if I'm asked to review it again the answer will be "Ready".
Regards Brian On 19/01/2014 11:37, Brian E Carpenter wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-netmod-system-mgmt-10.txt > Reviewer: Brian Carpenter > Review Date: 2014-01-19 > IETF LC End Date: 2014-01-22 > IESG Telechat date: 2014-01-23 > > Summary: Almost ready > -------- > > Comments: > --------- > > Since the version hasn't been updated yet I haven't changed the > review, but the authors' proposed changes are fine. Please > let me know if the -11 version comes out before the telechat. > > I haven't checked the yang syntax in detail. At first glance, > it looks good. > > > Minor Issues: > ------------ > > "2.1. System Identification > > There are many common properties used to identify devices, operating > systems, software versions, etc. that need to be supported in the > system data module. These objects are defined as operational state > data and the information returned by the server is intended to be > specific to the device vendor." > > Does "server" mean the NETCONF server? > > "2.2. System Time Management > > The management of the date and time used by the system need to be > supported. Use of one or more NTP servers to automatically set the > system date and time need to be possible. Utilization of the > Timezone database [RFC6557] also need to be supported. It should be > possible for the server, as well as clients, to configure the system > to use NTP." > > Again, does this mean the NETCONF server? Also, which clients? This is > the first time the document mentions clients. > > "2.3. User Authentication > > ...It should be possible for the server, as well as > clients, to configure the system authentication properties." > > Same comment as for 2.2. Also, how does the network administrator enforce > a specific strength of authentication? It seems as though the clients can > choose to downgrade security. > > "2.4. DNS Resolver > > The configuration of the DNS resolver within the system containing > the NETCONF server is required to control how domain names are > resolved." > > This is very hard to parse and could mean several things. Does it > mean that it MUST be possible to configure the DNS resolver? > (And I wonder what happens if the device is running mDNS?) > > "3.6. System Control > > The following operations are defined: > > set-current-datetime > system-restart > system-shutdown" > > My reaction is that this is a very limited set of operations. For example > how about system standby (enter power-saving mode)? Yes, I know that > creates the problem of how to wake the system up again, but there are > solutions to that problem (e.g. polling). I can imagine many vendor-specific > extensions in this area, too. > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
