Hi, Yes, these will be taken care of in the next release. I am currently waiting for direction from the doc shepherd or AD as per the statement below.
> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD > before > posting a new version of the draft. Ales > -----Original Message----- > From: Jari Arkko [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Thursday, March 27, 2014 12:40 PM > To: Ben Campbell > Cc: [email protected]; gen- > [email protected] Team ([email protected]) > Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC/Telechat Review of draft- > ietf-v6ops-64share-09 > > Thanks for the review, Ben! Authors, have you seen the > editorial comments? > > jari > > On Mar 21, 2014, at 9:24 PM, Ben Campbell <[email protected]> > wrote: > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For > background on > > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < > > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD > before > > posting a new version of the draft. > > > > Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-64share-09 > > Reviewer: Ben Campbell > > Review Date: 2014-03-21 > > IETF LC End Date: long time ago > > IESG Telechat date: 2014-03-27 > > > > Note: I somehow missed this assignment at last call time. > Therefore this review serves as both a last call and an IESG > telechat review. > > > > Summary: This draft is mostly ready for publication as an > informational RFC. I have a few editorial comments that might > be worth considering prior to publication. > > > > Major issues: None > > > > Minor issues: None > > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > > > -- Section 1, paragraph 1: > > > > Can you elaborate on what it means to "extend" The prefix > to a LAN link? Are we talking about routing IPv6 traffic from > other local devices (on the LAN) across the 3gpp link, for > example, like one might do when tethering devices to a phone > or mobile hotspot? > > Can you offer a reference for "the 3GPP specification"? > > > > Can you offer a reference for "the 3GPP specification"? > > > > -- paragraph 2: "This can be achieved by receiving the > Router Advertisement (RA) [RFC4861] announced globally unique > /64 IPv6 prefix from the 3GPP radio interface and then > advertising" > > > > What does these things. The UE? > > > > Please expand RA on first mention. > > > > -- section 3, R-1: > > > > Please expand SLAAC on first use. > > > > -- section 4.2, 1st paragraph: "The 3GPP RA /64 prefix > information is used to configure NDP on the LAN and assigns > itself an address on the LAN link." > > > > The prefix information assigns itself an address? I don't > think that's what you mean to say. > > > > -- section 4.2, step 7: > > > > Please expand DAD on first use. > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Gen-art mailing list > > [email protected] > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art Zásady komunikace, které společnost T-Mobile Czech Republic a.s. užívá při sjednávání smluv, jsou uvedeny zde http://www.t-mobile.cz/zasady. Není-li v zásadách uvedeno jinak, nepředstavuje tato zpráva konečný návrh na uzavření či změnu smlouvy ani přijetí takového návrhu. The communication principles which T-Mobile Czech Republic a.s. applies when negotiating contracts are defined here http://www.t-mobile.cz/principles. Unless otherwise stated in the principles, this message does not constitute the final offer to contract or an amendment of a contract or acceptance of such offer. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
