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Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-inter-domain-redundancy-05
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Apr-17-2014
IETF LC End Date: Apr-24-2014
IESG Telechat date: Not known.
This document is ready as a Proposed Standard but has some nits and a
minor issue that should be looked at.
Major: 0
Minor: 1
Nits: 7
Minor:
- Section 7, paragraph 2: Okay to use MD5? Or something stronger...?
Nits:
- Section 1, paragraph 1:
s/is to provide/provides/
- Section 1, paragraph 2:
s/options introduced./options are introduced./
- Section 3: What is an "ASBR"? If it is a well-known term in the
domain, I suspect you don't need to expand it ...
- Section 3: s/agreements(SLAs)./agreements (SLAs).
- Section 7, first paragraph: s/will have/has/
- Section 7, second paragraph:
s/ICCP is now/If ICCP is/
- Section 7: You use "pseudowire" here whereas in most of the
remaining document you used "PW". You may want to be consistent.
Thanks,
- vijay
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Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / [email protected]
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