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Document: draft-ietf-salud-alert-info-urns-12.txt
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 27 April 2014
IETF LC End Date: 25 April 2014
IESG Telechat date: (if known) N/A
Summary: Ready with nits/questions.
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
13. User Agent Behaviour
The User Agent (UA) MUST produce a reasonable rendering regardless of
the combination of URIs (of any schemes) in the Alert-Info header
field.
This MUST is not well defined to be implementable. How can conformance
or violation of this requirement can be tested? I suggest you avoid
using RFC 2119 language here.
Has this been submitted to the [email protected] mailing list for 2
weeks review? (as per RFC 3406)
Nits/editorial comments:
"REQ-4: has been deleted. To avoid confusion, the number will not be
reused".
I find this to be rather unusual. Are these requirements used in RFPs?
In Section 7:
date = [CC] YY [ "-" MM ["-" DD] ]
Is there a need for having 2 octet years? Are you trying to save some
bytes here at the expense of extra (albeit minor) complexity?
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