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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-appsawg-uri-get-off-my-lawn-04 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2014-05-06 IETF LC End Date: 2014-05-07 IESG Telechat date: 2014-05-15 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as BCP RFC but I have some editorial comments. Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 2], Section 1, "Because the owner of the URI (as defined in [webarch] Section 2.2.2.1) is choosing to use the server or the software" it is not clear what is meant by the part "or the software" -[Page 6], Section 2.5, "For example, an application that defines common fragment identifiers across media types not controlled by it is not conforming,... " suggestion for easier read: " For example, an application that defines common fragment identifiers across media types not controlled by it is said to be non-conforming, and would " Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson www.ericsson.com
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