Thanks for your review, Francis - much appreciated! Jari
On May 5, 2014, at 3:56 PM, Francis Dupont <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-esp-ah-reqts-07.txt > Reviewer: Francis Dupont > Review Date: 20140428 > IETF LC End Date: 20140503 > IESG Telechat date: unknown > > Summary: Ready > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > - in Toc page 2 and 6 (title) page 8: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments > > - 5 page 8: compability -> compatibility > > Regards > > [email protected] > > PS: I have no expert opinion (as not being an expert, i.e., a cryptographer) > about the backgound of requirement changes. Nevertheless they seems > to be in phase with one can find in current publications... > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
