Thanks for the careful review, Peter. And thanks for the -02, Donald. Jari
On 29 Apr 2014, at 18:28, Donald Eastlake <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Peter, > > I'm fine with all of your suggestion. Thanks for the review. > > Donald > ============================= > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) > 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA > [email protected] > > On Fri, Apr 25, 2014 at 1:30 AM, Peter Yee <[email protected]> wrote: >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> >> >> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you >> may receive. >> >> Document: draft-eastlake-iana-cfm-considerations-01 >> Reviewer: Peter Yee >> Review Date: April-24-2014 >> IETF LC End Date: May-21-2014 >> IESG Telechat date: TBD >> >> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Best Current >> Practice, but has some nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready >> with nits.] >> >> This document provides the IANA Considerations for two registries covering >> the IEEE Std 802.1Q-2011 CFM OpCode and TLV Type blocks assigned to the >> IETF. >> >> Nits: >> >> Most comments that follow are for alignment with the terminology and usage >> found in IEEE Std 802.1Q-2011. >> >> General: globally replace "Continuity" with "Connectivity". >> >> General: globally replace "Codepoints" with "Code Points". >> >> General: globally replace "Op-Code" with "OpCode". >> >> Page 3, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "IANA Consideration" to "IANA >> Considerations". >> >> Page 5, 1st paragraph: end the reference with a period. >> >> Page 5, 2nd paragraph: replace "Mansfield, S." with "and S. Mansfield" to >> match http://www.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/rfc-ref.txt. Hey, I'm running out >> of nits to pick here. :-) >> >> -Peter Yee >> >> >
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