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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-isis-fs-lsp-01 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2014-06-02 IETF LC End Date: 2014-06-03 IESG Telechat date: 2014-06-12 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC but I have some editorial comments. Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 5], Section 2, typo , "identifes"-->"identifies" -[Pages 8, 10, 12], typo: "sub-TLVss"----->"sub-TLVs" -[page 6] section 2.2, an example would be useful for: " o The eight bit type is encoded as an unsigned 16 bit integer o The eight bit length field is replaced by the 16 bit length field " -[Page 14], Section 5 the sentence could be more readable with the suggested change: old: " Even when all routers in a given scope support FS PDUs, if not all routers in the flooding domain for a given scope support that scope flooding of the FS-LSPs may be compromised. " suggested:(added ", then") " Even when all routers in a given scope support FS PDUs, if not all routers in the flooding domain for a given scope support that scope, then flooding of the FS-LSPs may be compromised. " -Suggestion, when reference to [IS-IS] is made, it would be very useful to point to the right section as well, when possible. Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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