Hi Jari, Brian, Thank you for your review on the P2MP PW REQ draft I've corrected to the typo in the version 10
BR Fred -----Original Message----- From: Jari Arkko [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Wednesday, 28 May 2014 17:16 To: Brian E Carpenter Cc: [email protected]; General Area Review Team Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-pwe3-p2mp-pw-requirements-09.txt Thanks for your review, Brian. Jari On 24 May 2014, at 06:26, Brian E Carpenter <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-p2mp-pw-requirements-09.txt > Reviewer: Brian Carpenter > Review Date: 2014-05-24 > IETF LC End Date: 2014-03-27 > IESG Telechat date: 2014-05-29 > > Summary: Ready > -------- > > Comment: > -------- > > The document states that it is scoped for MPLS substrates, but I see very > little > in it that requires MPLS. Archtecturally, it is quite general. Was there any > reason to limit the scope to MPLS? > > Nit > --- > > Newly added typo: > > 7. Contributing Aurhors > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
