>  - 3 3.7 (twice), 3.11 page 4 and 4 4.3 page 6: need -> needs

i believe that "x need not do y" is correct, so will leave it to the
rfced if you will indulge

>  - 3 3.14 page 4: wording (I had to read the 3.14 multiple times
>   to understand it)

how about

  While the formal validity of a routing announcement should be
  determined by the BGPsec protocol, local routing policy MUST
  be the final arbiter of best path and other routing
  decisions.

randy

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