> 
> Agree to unify the terminology. We may add a “Terminology section” similar to 
> the ones in [I-D.ietf-softwire-map] (Section 3).

would something like:

   This document describes a set of common DHCPv6 options for
   configuring the MAP-E [I-D.ietf-softwire-map], MAP-T
   [I-D.ietf-softwire-map-t] and Lightweight 4over6
   [I-D.ietf-softwire-lw4over6] mechanisms.  For definition of the
   terminology used in this document please see the relevant terminology
   sections in the above references.

work?
in the S46 Overview section.

cheers,
Ole


> 


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> 
> Congxiao
> 
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