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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-l3vpn-mvpn-mldp-nlri-06 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2014-10-27 IETF LC End Date: 2014-10-27 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments . Nits/editorial comments: Nits: -[Page 3] Section 1, "an SP may"---->"a SP may" -[Page 3] Section 1," "Subsequent Address Family" (SAFI)"---->" "Subsequent Address Family Identifier" (SAFI)" -[Page 3] Section 1, "Forwarding Equivalance"---->"Forwarding Equivalence" -[Page 5] PMSI first use not spelled out (P-Multicast Service Interface) Tunnel -[Page 6], "of these route"---->"of these routes" or "of these route types" -[Page 8], "the the NLRI"---->"the NLRI" -[Page 8] Range 0x41-0x7f, why not Range 0x40-0x7f ? 0x40-0x42 is specified as reserved. (should it be Range 0x43-0x7f ?) -[Page 11] References, [BGP-ERR] has a new revision (rfc editor should review the work in progress versions) Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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