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<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-murdock-nato-nid-02.txt Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review Date: 11/19/14 IETF LC End Date: 11/19/14 IESG Telechat date: 11/25/14 Summary: Almost Ready Major issues: 1. The document does not expand the acronym NATO at the first occurrence. Moreover, in section 7 it mentions 'that a standards body, like NATO' which is misleading - as NATO is not a standards body. I suggest to use the full name in the title and abstract, expand the acronym at first occurrence and correct the text in Section 7. 2. The abstract and introduction should make clear that this is a request made according to RFC 3406 for a formal URN space type, as described in Section 4.3 of RFC 3406. 3. As per RFC 3406, section 4.3: Ø The proposed template Ø should be sent to the: Ø Ø [email protected] Ø mailing list to allow for a two week discussion period for clarifying Ø the expression of the registration information, before the IESG Ø reviews the document. Ø I could not find in the summary written by the AD shepherd an indication whether this review occurred. Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments:
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