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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-probstate-reqs-03
Management of Networks with Constrained Devices: Problem Statement and
Requirements
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 2-January-2014
IETF LC End Date: 14-January-2014
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
Major issues: N/A
Minor issues: N/A
Nits/editorial comments:
A loss rate of "10^-0" might be better written as "1". And sounds
like a failed link rather than a loss rate, even if the cause is
interference. (last paragraph of section 1.3)
Section 3 states that requirements are uniquely identified by three
digit numbers. In fact, they are identified by a major section number
and a three digit minor requirement ID number. (So there is a 1.001 and
a 2.001). So the description of the requirements template in the start
of section 3 should be tuned to match what is being done.
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