Hi Martin, thank you for your kind review.
We will follow your comments for the update. Cheers, Mehmet > -----Original Message----- > From: ext Martin Thomson [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Friday, January 02, 2015 8:25 PM > To: [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: GenART review of draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-03 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-03 > Reviewer: Martin Thomson > Review Date: 2015-01-02 > IETF LC End Date: > IESG Telechat date: (if known) > > Summary: Ship it. > > Nits/editorial comments: > I think that there are a few too many Unnecessarily Capitalized > Phrases. Consider downcasing for statements like "Power, Energy, > Demand and Power Quality" or "It is assumed that Energy Management > will ". > > s/100.000/100,000/ _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
