Thanks for your review, Christer! (Authors, did you see the editorial comments?)
Jari On 24 Feb 2014, at 10:24, Christer Holmberg <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> > > Document: draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast-07 > > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg > > Review Date: 24 February 2014 > > IETF LC End Date: 7 February 2014 > > IETF Telechat Date: N/A > > Summary: I provided comments on a previous version (-05) of this > document. Unfortunately I can’t find the reply to my comments from the > authors, so some of my comments may not have been valid, or the authors may > have disagreed with my change suggestions. > > However, when I check the -07 version of the document I see that some of my > comments have not been addressed, so I’ll re-submit them again - just in case. > > > Major Issues: None > > Minor Issues: None > > Editorial nits: > > Section 1: > ------------ > > Q_1_1: > > I assume "LLN" stands for "Low power and Lossy Networks", but there is no > extension anywhere. Please insert "Low power and Lossy Networks (LLN)" on > first occurance. > > > Section 3: > ------------ > > Q_3_1: > > In a few places the text says "this protocol". I would suggest to replace > that with "MPL". > > > Section 4: > ----------- > > Q_4_2: > > I would suggest to add something in front of "Overview" in the subject of > section 4.3. Overview of what? :) > > > > > Regards, > > Christer > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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