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Document: draft-ietf-tram-turn-third-party-authz-09.txt
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review Date: 13 February 2015
IETF LC End Date: 4 January 2015
IETF Telechat Date: 19 February 2015
Summary: I see that there has been quite of bit of changes in the draft
since the previously reviewed version (-08). However, most of my comments seem
to have been addressed. But, I still have a few comments, most related to my
comments on the previously reviewed version.
Major Issues: None
Minor Issues: None
Editorial nits: See below
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Section 1:
Q1_2: Please add an OAuth reference on first occurrence.
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Section 4:
Q4_2: The section gives examples for the key establishment. I think you should
make it clear that, when you say that the mechanism to use is outside the scope
of the document, also should say the draft does not mandate any given mechanism.
Something like:
"The procedure for establishment of the symmetric key is outside the
scope of this
specification, and this specification does not mandate support of any
given mechanism.
Sections 4.1.2, 4.1.2 and 4.1.3 show examples of mechanisms that can be
used."
Section 4.1.2:
Q4-1-2_1: Please add a reference to JSON on first occurrence. I see that
section 3 no longer mentions JSON.
Q4-1-2_2: I suggest to add a reference to [I-D.ietf-oauth-pop-key-distribution]
also in this section, and indicate that it defines the format of the JSON
message.
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Regards,
Christer
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