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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-03 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2015-04-16 IETF LC End Date: 2015-04-16 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but it has some nits. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 1], Abstract, "those those specifically", remove extra "those" -[Page 6], end of 3.2, "if at all possible,"--->"if at all possible." -[Page 6], section 3.3, "separably"--->"separately" - [Page 10], ref [FlexFiles] has a new version 05 now - [Page 10], ref [Lustre] is expired. Should be removed? Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
