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Document:
draft-ietf-dhc-dynamic-shared-v4allocation-06
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review Date: 27 April 2015
IETF LC End Date: 6 May 2015
IETF Telechat Date: N/A
Summary: The document is well written, and
almost ready for publication. However, I have spotted a few places where I
think some additional text is needed.
Major Issues: None
Minor Issues: None
Editorial Issues:
Section 2:
Q_2_1:
The text says that the solution is not applicable for network access over
shared mediums.
I think it would be useful to add some words describing why that is the case.
Section 10:
Q_10_1:
The text says: "The security considerations in
[RFC2131] and [RFC7341] are to be considered."
I think a little more text is needed, talking
about what type of security considerations are referenced.
Q_10_2:
In section 10.1, I don't think you need to refer to section 2 for the target
use-case. Similar to my comment Q_2_1, you should give a little more
information about the DoS attack vulnerability in a shared medium.
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