Forwarding on behalf of Alexey. From: Alexey Melnikov [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: 10 May 2015 17:22 To: [email protected] Subject: Fwd: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-10 Hi Adrian, I am having some problems with the tools.ietf.org alias expansion. Can you forward to your co-editors? -------- Original Message --------
Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-10 Date: Sun, 10 May 2015 17:18:12 +0100 From: Alexey Melnikov <mailto:[email protected]> <[email protected]> To: [email protected], General Area Review Team <mailto:[email protected]> <[email protected]> [Resending] I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-10.txt Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov Review Date: 2015-05-10 IETF LC End Date: 2015-04-08 IESG Telechat date: N/A My apologies for the late review of this document. Summary: Ready with nits Minor (but some of these might be more serious): In 6.2.2: If an implementation of BGP-LS detects a malformed attribute, then it SHOULD use the ’Attribute Discard’ action as per [I-D.ietf-idr-error-handling] Section 2. This needs to be a Normative reference. Or you can keep it as Informative, if you change the sentence not to use RFC 2119 language. In 3.3.1.1 - does this need a new IANA registry? (I am fine if you think you don't). In 3.3.1.3/3.3.2.7 - what is "subset of the FQDN"? In 3.3.2.3: The TE Default Metric TLV carries the TE-metric for this link. The length of this TLV is fixed at 4 octets. I am probably showing my ignorance, but is the term "TE-metric" defined somewhere? The description below suggests it has substructure, which I don't know anything about. If a source protocol (e.g. IS-IS) does not support a Metric width of 32 bits then the high order octet MUST be set to zero. Best Regards, Alexey _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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