Thanks Francis. I will address the below nits in the next revision. Ram
-----Original Message----- From: Francis Dupont <[email protected]> Date: Sunday, 17 May 2015 6:35 pm To: "[email protected]" <[email protected]> Cc: "[email protected]" <[email protected]> Subject: review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun-06.txt Resent-From: <[email protected]> Resent-To: <[email protected]> Resent-Date: Sunday, 17 May 2015 6:40 pm >I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > ><http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > >Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments >you may receive. > >Document: draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun-06.txt >Reviewer: Francis Dupont >Review Date: 20150515 >IETF LC End Date: 20150513 >IESG Telechat date: 20150514?? > >Summary: Ready > >Major issues: None > >Minor issues: None > >Nits/editorial comments: > I reviewed the 06 version. > > - 1 page 3: signalling -> signaling > > - 4.1 page 5: after the terminology section it is recommended to avoid > lower case keywords (e.g., the may in "A B2BUA may be in"). > > - 4.4 page 11: a may and a should... > > - authors' addresses pages 13 and 14: India is the full country name, > US the ISO IS 3166 code (the full name is USA). The current rule > is to use 3166 two letter codes, I raised a concern as the UPU > has the opposite rule (full names). Let the RFC Editor to handle this? > >Regards > >[email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
