Thanks again for your review, Suresh! For what it is worth, I agree with his comments below.
Jari On 10 Jun 2015, at 05:50, Suresh Krishnan <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before > posting a new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-dprive-problem-statement-05.txt > Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan > Review Date: 2015/06/09 > IESG Telechat date: 2015/06/11 > > Summary: Thank you for this very interesting and well written document. > This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC but I do > have a few minor comments you may wish to consider. > > Minor: > > * General > > Not really sure if it belongs in this document, but I personally think > that DNScrypt is probably worth at least a passing mention as it > specifically deals with encryption of DNS requests. > > https://www.opendns.com/about/innovations/dnscrypt/ > > * Section 2.1 > > In this text below it is unclear what value the parenthesized text adds. > Suggest removing this text or provide examples of the "more dubious reasons" > > " The zone transfer QTYPE [RFC5936] is often blocked or restricted to > authenticated/authorized access to enforce this difference (and maybe > for other, more dubious reasons)." > > * Section 8.3 > > Why is there a separate class of references for URI? Shouldn't this be > folded into either Normative or Informative? To be more specific, what > exactly is the difference between the Google Public DNS Privacy > reference in the URI subsection and the other Wikipedia references in 8.2. > > Editorial: > > * Section 1 > s/assume/assumes/ > > Thanks > Suresh > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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