Hi Warren, Q1_2:
>>>> It is really difficult to understand what a Negative Trust Anchor is >>>> when reading section 1. In section 1.1 you talk about Trust Anchors, >>>> but if a Negative Trust Anchor is related to a Trust Anchor I think >>>> it would be good to mention that already in section 1. Then, in >>>> section 1.1, you can focus on the differences between a Trust Anchor and a >>>> Negative Trust Anchor. >>> >>> Now that I've shuffled the paragraphs around, and moved some >>> additional text further down, I *think* I have made this OK (section 1 is >>> shorter and >>> flows better, so I think it is fine). Please let me know if you disagree... >> >> You have the following sentences: >> >> "This document defines the Negative Trust Anchor (NTA), which can be used >> during the transition to ubiquitous DNSSEC deployment." >> >> ...followed by: >> >> "NTAs are configured locally on a validating DNS recursive resolver to >> shield end users from DNSSEC-related authoritative name server >> operational errors." >> >> Between those sentences, it would be nice to get some kind of idea >> what an NTA is. Is it a box, is it a function within an existing box, >> etc etc? :) > > I did not make any changes here. An NTA is a configuration on a DNS recursive > resolver, to answer > your question -- and the sentence you quoted says that... I'm not sure that > there's anything else that > would further clarify, but you're welcome to suggest specific text if you > believe otherwise. I'm happy with your explanation :) Thanks! Regards, Christer _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
