Hi Uma,
See below...
On 30/06/2015 06:19, Uma Chunduri wrote:
> Hi Brian,
>
> Thanks for your review (apologies for the delay from my side).
> Response i-line [Uma]:
>
> --
> Uma C.
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Brian E Carpenter [mailto:[email protected]]
> Sent: Friday, June 12, 2015 7:37 PM
> To: [email protected]; General Area Review Team
> Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04
>
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> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may
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>
> Document: draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04.txt
> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review Date: 2015-06-13
> IETF LC End Date: 2015-07-03
> IESG Telechat date:
>
> Summary: Almost ready
> --------
>
> Minor Issue:
> ------------
>
>> 3.2. Key Management Protocols
>
> I don't like the references to expired drafts. These drafts almost have the
> flavour of normative references, since apparently they described recommended
> mitigation techniques. If they matter, they should be properly available.
> draft-weis-gdoi-mac-tek-03
> draft-yeung-g-ikev2-08
> draft-hartman-karp-mrkmp-05
>
> [Uma]: Sure. But to give a bit context quickly -
>
> KARP WG started working on group keying protocol based on IKEv2 when I used
> these references. But, later scope is changed and this aspect didn't go
> forward as expected.
> So I would remove the references to draft-yeung-g-ikev2-08 and
> draft-hartman-karp-mrkmp-05. However, though expired, I would like to keep
> the reference for
> draft-weis-gdoi-mac-tek-03 and associated RFC 6407, so in future it can
> present a good reference to GDOI in this context. Hope this is acceptable
> else I shall remove this too.
Thanks for the answer. I am still a bit concerned that a reader will be
slightly confused, though. Can I suggest trying to rephrase the sentence
a bit, something like:
OLD:
A mechanism,
similar to as described in [I-D.weis-gdoi-mac-tek] can be used to
distribute group keys to a group of ISes in Level-1 area or Level-2
domain, using GDOI as specified in [RFC6407].
NEW:
A mechanism is needed to distribute group keys to a group of ISes
in a Level-1 area or Level-2 domain, using the Group Domain of
Interpretation (GDOI) protocol as specified in [RFC6407]. An example
policy and payload format was described in [I-D.weis-gdoi-mac-tek].
Regards
Brian
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