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Document: draft-ietf-dane-ops-14.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2015/08/02
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2015/08/06
Summary:
Ready with nits. This version clears up most of the issues that I had
with -12 except that I am slightly wary of the extensive usage of RFC
2118 keywords in contexts that appear to be operational guidance and may
not be enforceable by implementations of the basic DANE protocol. There
are a couple of left over and/or introduced nits that didn't get fixed
from -13 to -14.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
I am not totally convinced about the remaining usage of RFC 2118
keywords, but I'll leave that for the ADs to consider.
Nits/editorial comments:
There are a couple of nits introduced by the edits (or left over from
the previous version):
s3, para 2: s/ When a servers does/When a server does/,
s/SHOULD respond/the server SHOULD respond/
s8, para 3, last sentence: s/the only other/The only other/
s10.1, next to last para: s/as when significantly/as the full
certificates are significantly/
s12, bullet 4: s/to processes extended/to process extended/
s14, last para: s/PKIX-TA(0(/PKIX-TA(0)/
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