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Document: draft-ietf-tls-padding-01
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-08-14
IETF LC End Date:  2015-08-24
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some 
comments .

Major issues:

Minor issues:
-The draft's "Intended status:" is missing in the title.

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 2], Introduction, it would be clearer if the introduction would give 
more high level information or a reference to the 'implementation bug' being 
referred to:
"At least  one of these implementation bugs can be ameliorated by making the  
ClientHello even larger."
Is this bug the one explained in Section 4?

-[Page 2], "consists of an arbitary"---->"consists of an arbitrary"

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
Research
www.ericsson.com
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