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Document: draft-ietf-dime-ovli-09.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2015/08/19
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2015/08/20
Summary: Ready. Thanks for addressing my last call comments (except one
minor change got missed - see below). A good document. [Apologies for
somewhat late review - in inter-continental airport limbo.]
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
s4.2: I commented on the possibility of turning off an abatement
algorithm at last call. Having thought this through, I assume that in
general it would be sufficient for a reacting node to stop announcing
its capability. If this is correct it might be worth mentioning this
(as with changing presumably this would be an exceptional case but could
happen). I don't think that anything very special would have to be done
with stateful algorithms but maybe a comment would help.
Nits/editorial comments:
s5.2.1.1: Adding a pointer to s7.3 was discussed and agreed but hasn't
happened.
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