Thank you very much for your review, Meral. Authors, have you seen these comments?
Jari On 13 Aug 2015, at 21:31, Meral Shirazipour <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may > receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause-08 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2015-08-13 > IETF LC End Date: 2015-08-13 > IESG Telechat date: NA > > > Summary: > This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC; I have some > editorial comments. > > > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > -[Page 4], "which either uses"---->"which either use" > > -[Page 5], Section 2.1 some of the terms are never used in the draft like > 3GPP, BGW, MTU, SGW, TCP, LTE... > > -[Page 11], "include CSRC in it's stream "---->"include CSRC in its stream" > > -[Page 18], "with first hand information"---->"with firsthand information" > > -[Page 21], Figure 4 caption would be clearer to say if it applies to sender > e.g. "RTP Pause States in Sender" > > -[Page 50], "SRTP is the the most"---->"SRTP is the most" > > > > Best Regards, > Meral > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson > Research > www.ericsson.com > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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