I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey-11.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150911 IETF LC End Date: 20150923 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 6 page 6: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1 page 3: IMHO the choice of the SubjectPublicKeyInfo format is the right one. - 3 page 4: is a a very -> is a very - A.1 page 8 and A.2 page 10: i.e. -> i.e., - A pages 7 - 10: BTW I used your 2 examples to add new unit tests in an application crypto library so I can confirm the 2 SPKIs are correct. Regards [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
